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Careful what you say quietly

If no one hears why speak at all

I thought I was whispering

Everyone was watching me

I was screaming loud.

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7 Comments

  1. Aye, too true – it’s often what we hope that we can display on the down low that becomes the image that others see on the jumbotron of existance. Nicely done.

  2. smart words.
    lovely said.

  3. very smart.. sassy. Nice!

  4. a photo in the form of words. reminds me of later bukowski or maybe a not-overly-verbose hemingway.

  5. Interesting verse Shere-Akrhan. I liked with few words the sensation you have created. Thanks

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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  6. This is Great!

  7. This is quite a picture you paint indeed…subtle and shrewd.


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